Friends
My dad is the drug mastermind, and my mom loves money. My dad has a lot
of money, that’s the only reason my mom is staying with him. I have a lot of
money too that’s the reason I am the most popular kid in the school.
But I don’t want so much money I don’t want all these friends, I know
the most of them only are friends with me because I have so much money. But I
will figure out who of them there is the real friends, and I will do all to get
the real friends visible. I will start with my mother, I need to get my dad to understand
that my mother only loves him because he has money. I nervously walked up to my
dad, and there he was standing in his black t-shirt and blue jeans. “Dad I got
to show you something…” I said “What is the problem my son?” I slowly took mum´s phone out of my left
pocket, and showed him the texts from mum´s phone, I couldn´t even believe the
texts myself. But there they were standing on that little phone screen.
Hi Dan I had an amazing time
last night, I would like to see you tomorrow Love Jane.
My dad was just looking at the small screen totally shocked.
“Why did you show me this, son?” He asked quiet. “Because I wanted you to know, that mom only stays with you because of youre money, and she dosent really love you anymore” I said. My dad was totally quiet, you could tell by the look in his eyes that he was broken. “I will just go out for a minut, I got stuff to do and money to earn.” He said cold and walked out of the door. I didn’t know what to do or fell. But I thought that I had to finish the mission I was started on.
The next day I walked down town. I had a big hoodie on, perfect to go for a little “shopping”. I walked into the store with clothes for men. I took 2 t-shirts under my hoodie and a pair of shoes in my pants. A guy from the store saw me and got over to me and told me I needed to stop that and go with him. I began running out but was stopped by 2 policemen and I was grabbed and followed into a little room.
Some days after the crime I had made, I was going to the court. I came in and saw that my dad was there. I smiled, and realized how much he really ment to me. When I got longer in to the place where we should sit, I saw my five best friends sitting there. They smiled to me all but they also looked very nervous. At first I was scared, bit when I saw them, sitting there, just smiling to me, like everything was going to be okay, all that disappeared. They all called me innocent, but after all, I got to prison for a year.
I was so lonely, but the thought of my friend saved me. The day I came out, they all stood there. Like we saw each other yesterday, they just stood there and smiled to me again. They where the real friends. And they still are.
“Why did you show me this, son?” He asked quiet. “Because I wanted you to know, that mom only stays with you because of youre money, and she dosent really love you anymore” I said. My dad was totally quiet, you could tell by the look in his eyes that he was broken. “I will just go out for a minut, I got stuff to do and money to earn.” He said cold and walked out of the door. I didn’t know what to do or fell. But I thought that I had to finish the mission I was started on.
The next day I walked down town. I had a big hoodie on, perfect to go for a little “shopping”. I walked into the store with clothes for men. I took 2 t-shirts under my hoodie and a pair of shoes in my pants. A guy from the store saw me and got over to me and told me I needed to stop that and go with him. I began running out but was stopped by 2 policemen and I was grabbed and followed into a little room.
Some days after the crime I had made, I was going to the court. I came in and saw that my dad was there. I smiled, and realized how much he really ment to me. When I got longer in to the place where we should sit, I saw my five best friends sitting there. They smiled to me all but they also looked very nervous. At first I was scared, bit when I saw them, sitting there, just smiling to me, like everything was going to be okay, all that disappeared. They all called me innocent, but after all, I got to prison for a year.
I was so lonely, but the thought of my friend saved me. The day I came out, they all stood there. Like we saw each other yesterday, they just stood there and smiled to me again. They where the real friends. And they still are.
Really good and entertaining story
SvarSlet- Asger and Stina
Really good story but try to variate your language a little bit, f.ex. don't use money all the time, but try to find other words for it. Rasmus and BT
SvarSletBrilliant story
SvarSlet